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OOC Creations
« on: March 17, 2012, 12:32:32 PM »
(I split this out of the music folder because it didn't seem like the right place for it.  Please feel free to post your own creations here.  I understand if you don't, copyright issues or whatever.  Mine will be here.)


(I know that this thread is meant for music.  What is in the body is not a song, not a real one anyway.  Some may think they know what it means, others may actually know, but I would be surprised by that.  I will be editing this piece as I have the heart to work on it.  Please if you have opinions on it put them in OOC Chatter.  I would ask that you be kind, and assume nothing.  I have put some of this into a letter thread in of swords and Silk...it was easy there because there it isn't real, and it is only in part.  This may be the hardest post I have ever placed, as it is very real to me.  There is no music to this, I don't have that talent, I wish I did.  I have received one favorable comment from Reap's player, sorry he got the preview...Thanks bro!!)

Untitled~ Lyrics by Me

(v1)
Did I say something to hurt you?
Is that why I feel shame?
Your silence can?t protect you from me.
How do I make it feel the same?

(ch. 1)
Well you give, I take.
While I was dreaming, I must have left you awake.
You?ve soothed my every whisper, and I can?t give you peace.
Darlin? do what you have to; scream my name you?ll be released!
(Scream my name you?ll be released!)
Rage against me angel; make me feel your pain
Rage against me darling, make me want in vain.

(v2)
Have I ever given pleasure?
Or did I cause you only pain?
I can remember your secret smiles.
Will you ever bring them back again?

(ch. 2)
Well you ask; I?ll beg.
Your voice is what I crave, those vibrations through my head.
I know I am unworthy, I know that I have failed.
But I can?t make myself say I?m sorry,
I?m sure my feelings seem so staled!
(I?m sure my feelings seem so staled!)
Rage against me angel, I have made you cry.
Rage against me darling, can?t you see it in my eye?

(v3)
Does no one hear me whisper?
Has my sorrow filled the night?
Would any still take pity on me?
If they knew I don?t want to make it right.

(ch3)
Well you cry; I?m cold
You gave me everything and still I asked for your soul.
I left you standing, just an empty shell.
I shattered you to pieces.
Who am I to put you through this hell?
(Who am I to put you through this hell?)
Rage against me angel, hurt me to the bone.
Rage against me darling, then leave me here alone.

(v4)
Did I say something to hurt you?
Is this how it ends?
So many troubles stand in our way now.
How can we ever make amends?

 (ch. 1a)
Well you give; I?ll take
I?ll still be sleeping you?ll still be awake
Though you?ll soothe my every whisper again, you?ll never get that peace.
So do what you have to, tell me now you?ll be released.
(tell me now you?ll be released)
Rage against me angel, come on make me cry
Rage against me darling, is this how we die?

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Need an edit?
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2012, 11:55:02 AM »
(v2)
Have I ever given pleasure?
Or did I cause you only pain?
I can remember your secret smiles.
Will you ever bring them back again?


Okay, I am sitting here looking at this, I know it has been a while since I put it up, but as I said I would work on it when I had the heart to...that is a development.  Line four of this verse, I can't quite reconcile in my head.  I suppose this could be considered over thinking, but it is my piece and this is a flaw to me.

I was thinking that perhaps it should read more like.

Will you bring them back again?

You know take the ever out of the line completely.  It seems to flow a little better to me.  That's what I see at first glance, will read again and see what else I find.

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2012, 01:36:41 AM »
Wrote something new today, random and unexpected...short and possibly sweet.

In the brambles I make my bed
upon nettles and spikes I lay.
You surround me with vibrant collors
yellow and purple to break the grey.
You dance for me just out of view,
your tinkling laughter fills my night.

I know...it's silly.

D~there can be only one...thank all that is holy.

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2012, 01:07:16 AM »
The following song should be sung to Apologize by One Republic.  It is a spoof that my daughter and I wrote some years ago and well we loved it.


It's too late to order fries....


I pulled off of the road
 
I think I made it just in time
 
Well lucky me i made it to being the first in line
 
He asked me what my order was
 
But the lights had all turned off and I screamed wait!
 
He told me that he's sorry

but I have run out of time and He said...
 
 
 
It's too late to order fries, it's too late
 
It's too late to order fries, It's too late
 
 
 
So I went up to the door and looked the manager in the eyes
 
I said give me one more chance, look at me
 
I really want these fries
 
He pointed at his watch and
 
laughed at me until he cried
 
and he said
 
Sorry buddy but it's 12:02 and you are out of time
 
so be on your way
 
 
 
It's too late to order fries, It's too late
 
It's too late to order fries, it's to late
 
 
 
(band Solo)
 
 
 
It's too late to order fries, It's too late
 
It's too late to order fries, it's too late
 
It's too late to order fries yeah.....
 
It's too late to order fries, yeah...
 
I got back in my car, slammed the door and then drove away

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #4 on: November 05, 2012, 03:35:50 PM »
3 A.M. and I'm sitting here left all alone,
trying to figure out just what went wrong.  
It wasn't long ago everything seemed to go my way.
Theres an ache in my chest that I can't describe.
And I wonder how to stop feeling I am wasting your time.
Tell me my dear ain't it just true you don't need me?

Well we cut off the power turned out the light
there in the dark we couldn't tell what was right.
Here in th dark I sit alone no one sees me.
I sit here believing I am just a pest
wondering frantically what I do next
My lovers are gone still I have this song
I don't want it.

Now when the silence takes over the room
I spend my time thinking of you.
Wondering why it's your name I cry
I know you can't hear which just makes it clear
you don't need me.

Well I don't want to start again down the same path
You said that you'd care then you turned your back
I'm not very strong, I've known all along
you don't need me.

(okay..done for now)

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #5 on: March 18, 2013, 09:58:48 PM »
I can?t find relief,
into my pillows I have screamed.
The message is crystal clear,
 there is no doubt it?s me you fear.
Excuses they run thin,
When what I want is there within.

No one knows just what goes
Stuck behind doors that I have closed.
With words you tell me no
But don?t have the strength to tell me go.

Well to this point I do concede,
I am not one to let things be.
A message undefined,
Into the darkness goes my mind.
I?ll only cause the pain,
My thoughts my deeds will I restrain.

No one knows just what goes
Stuck behind doors I have closed.
I know that you?ve told me no.
Say the words, I?ll let you go.

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2013, 08:30:10 PM »
Can not, touch the, one I need.
Can not, feel her, when I bleed.
I know darkness and all its lies.
You take all things and set me aside!

I can take the pain I feel
I can re-di-rect into steel
I know shadows I?ve seen its eyes.
It offers me things I buy.

Hanging by a thread.
Rolling in the dead?of night.
He knocked me down
I bleed but I get up again!

From the darkness I saw his eyes
They flash redly with cruelest smile
Blackness from above
White beneath, he shoves.

Hanging by a thread.
Rolling in the dead?of night
Scratching for my place.
I told you I would face?you.

The hag she says you?ll see the light.
Stone seat, she don?t, speak for wrong or right.
I can?t touch the one I need.
The one who on my soul would feed.

Hanging by a thread.
Rolling in the dead?of night.
You thought that I was down.
But I am still around.

Your face disgrace you ask so mean.
No fear in here I think I have come clean.
I need you in me.
And you can?t take my life!

Hanging by a thread.
You?ll never see me dead?that?s right.
You won?t give me what I need.
My turn to?make you bleed.

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #7 on: May 16, 2013, 02:57:56 AM »
Through the silver mist into the black
I try to follow you but get forced right back
You know that I love you,
Why can?t you ever just see me?

We were born on a day in a world full of doubt
We led with our hearts while our souls got ripped out
You know that I want you
Why can?t you ever believe me?

Feelings on trial and my head is a mess
Consider my pain, from wounds still fresh
You know that I long, is that so wrong?
You don?t hear me.

Well I screamed all my power into the night
Shattered my soul to provide you light
Now I?m lost and what?s the cost?
You can?t have me.

Bits of me scattered before the wind
Gathered tatters again I begin
Built once again, not the same man
You don?t know me.

Well I followed the moonlight into the night
Faced the east and welcomed the light
Right or wrong, now I am strong
You don?t own me.

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #8 on: May 22, 2013, 03:12:46 AM »
I know I?m not supposed to see.
Looking at you looking at me.
Who are you to watch?
What could your interest be?

Silently you slipped away.
Silently you slipped away.  
Silently you slipped away.
I stab at the place where doubt lives.  

Strange how familiar it all seems.
How much love can one find?  
None where there is doubt.
I stab at the place where doubt lives.

Piercing pain and cutting strokes.  
Anger?s past in blackened blood.  
I stab at the place where doubt lives.
Sweet is the kiss of the knife.
 
Ecstasy in razor?s edge.  
Slicing flesh and cutting bone.
I stab at the place where doubt lives.
My once perfect heart,
 
Beating now,
Laboring in uncertainty.
I stab at the place where doubt lives.
Silently you slip away.  

Silently?slip?away?stabbing?doubt.
Live!

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« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 06:06:50 AM »
Don't tell me that you love me,
I could wish it true.
There is no room though you see,
For me and he and you.

Don't tell me that you hate me,
though I could take the pain.
I'd use it to set you free,
Though I would always keep the stain.

Don't let me think you care my love.
Let me not matter in that way.
You light up the pedestal above.
I wander through the grey.

What's it like upon that height?
Do you see the one beneath.
Don't tell me, or let me in your sight.
Perhaps one day a wreathe.

Will it be a year or two?  Ten?
Will it matter?  Will I?
You may come to me then.
Smile once and whisper goodbye.

(J'ai fini)

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #10 on: June 02, 2013, 06:22:43 AM »
Your smile breaks my heart.
We knew it all along.
When you are away
Even for a day.
Your smile breaks my heart.

Tell me have you had enough?
Tell me is the going rough?
Cuz when you are away,
Even for a day
You know your smile breaks my heart.

Honey is it killing you?
Knowing what you put me through.
You have to go away.
Each and every day.
So why?s that smile break my heart?

They tell me that you have no choice.
But I can hear it in your voice.
Each time you go away,
Ending every day.
You know your smile breaks my heart.

Tell me is he good to you?
I don?t know what I should do.
Each time you walk away
And I want you to stay.
You know your smile breaks my heart.

You are my castle in the sand.
I should have built on higher land.
The tide rushes in waves
Washing you away.
And then your smile breaks my heart.

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« Reply #11 on: June 06, 2013, 10:59:17 PM »
You can have my time minutes, hours, honey you can take days.
You know that?s just fine, I get caught up in your mysterious ways.
You will steal my heart, that?s alright I don?t need it anyway.

Here I go again, rounding the same bend, falling for you.
Where does it stop, will it ever stop, tell me what should I do?
Got you stuck in my head, tugging every thread, lonely through the night.
Should I play along, till the fear is gone, or just give up the fight?

Babe I only have this one heart, if you take it now don?t know what you?ll start.
I?ve let it go before and been hurt real bad, when I crawled away it was all I had.
I know I?ve said this from the start, but I only have this one heart.

You know it?s so hard, letting past go and picking up once again.
You are just a dream, a wish that I made way back then.
Darling I?ve been broken, beaten, been defeated, I?m not worth a damn.
You come along, ignoring all that?s wrong, reaching out your hand.

Babe I only have this one heart, if you take it now don?t know what you?ll start.
I?ve let it go before and been hurt real bad, when I crawled away it was all I had.
I know I?ve said this from the start, but I only have this one heart.

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Re: OOC Creations
« Reply #12 on: June 07, 2013, 10:58:09 AM »
Listen then, I won't ask you to betray.
Where I see hope, it?s just another day.
Are you full of thoughts about guilty feelings?
Lay your head down and listen to me breathing.

They say things like this happen all the time.
We can?t be blamed for the hotels in our minds.
When the spirits strong the bodies weak.
When I?m with you I look, never to speak.

Hidden smiles and secret glances.
Deep inside I know my chances.
Time?s against us, we?ve no fate.
You?re too early, I?m too late.

Do nothing you can?t face.
Alone at night I?m going to find our place.
You take the day and I?ll rule the night.
 holding on there is no wrong there is no right.

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« Reply #13 on: June 08, 2013, 07:10:30 AM »
Angel?s breath can tell no lies.
Hold me in my dark disguise.
Trapped within a magic mind
Leaving the world far behind.

Hills of jade and purple skies
Magic world where my heart flies.
Close my eyes so I may see.
Things the way they should be.

Smile in place, words on the page.
Reality becomes my stage.
Play the part for which I am meant.
None shall no where my heart went.

Oh composer write the score!
To magic world where my heart soars.
Gravity can?t pull me down.
Symphony of sights and sound.

Please composer write the score!
Follow me to the magic door!
Can you hear me calling from within?
And I don?t care where you have been.

Come on in now don?t you cry.
Angel?s breath shall tell no lies.
You?re welcome in this secret place.
Behind the door you?re always safe.

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« Reply #14 on: June 13, 2013, 08:59:06 AM »
What have,
you done to me?
I was frozen,
in agony.
Happy,
to be in pain,

Now I don?t want to feel that way again.

When you,
say my name,
You take,
a piece of me.
Losing,
more day by day,

I know this is how it supposed to be.

I?m bent,
beneath my needs
Get close,
catch the disease.
Packaged,
for all to see

A suitcase full of misery.

I can?t forget,
what it means to be
Alone,
in a world that?s free.
Anger,
seeps into bone.

Turning thoughts to hate and heart to stone.

What have,
you done to me?
Anger,
indignity.
Happy,
to be in pain,

I don?t want to feel this way again.

Last time,
was meant to be
The last time,
for me you see.
On my knees,
and head bowed down.

While I beg the earth to be underground.

My heart,
wears a crown of thorns.
Deep wounds,
and bloodstained floors.
Bodies,
behind me lay.

Why didn?t you take the hint and stay away?

Bitter,
the herbs I serve.
Empty,
what I deserve.
Standing,
in darkest night

Closing my eyes won?t unsee the sight.

What have,
you done to me?
Desperate,
for your company
Frightened,
of being alone

What happened to this heart of stone?

My tears,
are left unshed.
My heart,
it aches instead.
Yearning,
for what you have.

It feels good but I know it?s bad.

I don?t,
care what they say.
I want,
you anyway.
Almost,
you make me believe.

If you come to me there?s no reprieve.

I lift,
eyes to you.
Unshuttered,
seeing true.
Burning,
me with your light

If I lose the dark will I be all right?

What have,
you done to me?
Visions,
of what could be.
Place me,
where I don?t belong.

Instead of being hard I will be strong.